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‘Mockingjay’ disappointing end to ‘Hunger Games’ trilogy

Published: Friday, April 8, 2011

Updated: Friday, April 8, 2011 10:04

Suzanne Collins rocked with her first two books in the "Hunger Games" trilogy, each earning 4.5 out of 5 stars in my reviews, so I expected no less from her final installment, "Mockingjay." Unfortunately, what goes up must come down, and "Mockingjay" was a disappointing conclusion to this otherwise fantastic series.

I do not normally use spoilers in my reviews. I see that as just being lazy. However, I'm at a loss over how to describe exactly why I am so disappointed with the book without ruining the surprise for everyone. I have come to the conclusion that, in this case, spoilers are necessary. Consider yourself warned.

"Mockingjay" picks up shortly after "Catching Fire," where Katniss Everdeen's home of District 12 has been destroyed and a small band of survivors have sought refuge in the mysterious and hidden District 13. District 13's President Coin wants to use Katniss in videos to promote the fight against the evil Capitol and President Snow. Meanwhile, Peeta has been kidnapped by the Capitol and is being used in propaganda denouncing District 13 and Katniss.

Here's where things start to get flakey: Peeta has been brainwashed by the Capitol to the point that he truly believes Katniss is dangerous and he has been programmed to kill her. In spite of that, he warns her that the Capitol is about to bomb District 13, saving her and countless other lives. No explanation is ever given.

Things go from bad to worse in the second half of the book. Author Suzanne Collins introduces new characters and soon kills them, but I felt little sympathy because these characters had no depth whatsoever. She also kills off a few characters from the first and second book, including Finnick and Katniss' sister, Prim. I do not have any problem with main or important characters dying. If done properly, it can be a brilliant move, however, Collins did not do it right.

Finnick's death is "offscreen" and Katniss moves on without even really thinking about it much, so his death had no impact other than shock value. Prim's death is even worse because she had no reason to be on the battlefield at her young age — a fact acknowledged by Katniss — and yet we never learn just how or why she was sent to die. If it were my sister and I'd just spent the last two-and-a-half books saving her, I would want to know what had happened and I would not stop until I found answers. Katniss pouts for a while, then gives up.

What Collins should have done was kill either Peeta, Gale or Katniss. She chooses not to martyr Katniss, which is understandable because it's not easy to do. She does not kill Peeta and I can assume it's simply for suspense purposes, because you spend most of the book waiting for him to snap and kill Katniss. But how will Katniss choose between Peeta and Gale in matters of love? Does Collins kill Gale? No, she makes him disappear and a periphery character says to Katniss that he got a good job in District 2, so he left without saying goodbye. What?

Next, we have Katniss' decision to kill President Coin instead of Snow. Coin was barely seen or mentioned and yet Katniss decides Coin is the greater evil. If she had taken the time to build this up a little better with more information and interactions with the character, it would have worked much better.

Another problem I had with the book was the symbolism. She played the whole "girl on fire" bit well in the first book, but it kind of sputtered and died in the second book. Now she's trying to tout her heroine as "the Mockingjay," but the efforts seem forced and stale. Repeating something over and over does not make it catchy or cool.

Finally, we have the lackluster ending. Peeta and Katniss get married and have kids and Katniss spends the last few paragraphs lamenting over the day her children find out about her past. No information about her mom or Gale, no information about the new government, who is in charge, the reformation of the country, or anything else. In other words, she ends the book with no clear conclusion to anything and I found this to be very frustrating, like getting cheated out of a really cheap date.

Two stars. There are good bits in this book, namely in the first half, but overall it's disappointing, badly constructed and leaves more questions than answers. If you're a fan of the first two books, like I am, don't bother to read "Mockingjay."

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Anonymous
Thu Feb 16 2012 23:47
I think the ending was excellent. This is Collins' book and she knew the fate of the characters from the start. Prim had to die. She was originally supposed to be in the Hunger Games, where she would have died. Its destiny. They were always playing the Games until Coin and Snow were killed. Katniss saying yes to the last Hunger Games just showed how much everything she went through changed her, and the effect it had on her. I don't think she really meant it.

As for Peeta and Gale- She could have never been with Gale. What she had with Gale was innocent and pure- ruined by the past events. Yes her was her best friend and yes she loved him, and will always love him- but it wouldn't have been right. Gale was meant to do big things and needed to do big things. Katniss just wanted to be out of the spotlight and be home. I also think it is completely in her character to push away her mom and Gale.

ALSO- Katniss didn't want to have kids because she didn't want them to live in the society she lived in, and she didn't want her kids to have a chance of being tributes. Once this was over, Peeta was able to convince her to have kids, and she had them because she loved him so much.

Personally, I cried like a baby at the end of this. Yes, I rooted for Gale the entire series but at the end you just have to accept what happens. I think you all need to reread it just with an open mind and accpet what happens happens. Authors have always said they don't chose what their characters do- they just write it down for them. I loved the ending and I hope you give it another shot!

Anonymous
Thu Feb 16 2012 21:31
That would be a nice ending..I specifically like the part of Gale's self sacrifice. It would be much more fulfilling than him leaving because he realized their rift in their friendship could never be repaired. However, I can't see Katniss as the leader of Panem. It was never something that she wanted. She felt forced into being the Mockingjay and I can't see her happily assuming that role for good.
Anonymous
Thu Feb 16 2012 16:47
I cannot express how completely dissatisfied I am with the ending of this series. Did Suzanne Collins have a brain lapse?!? What was she thinking?! It's like she never made up her mind about the story herself- whether Katniss should be a brave heroine or a heartbroken lover, whether Katniss is really in love with Peeta or not, whether she should pick Gale or Peeta, whether the new government would be good or evil, etc. She gives readers a complete runaround only to leave us completely mentally exhausted and clueless. I agree with the author of the article that either Katniss, Peeta or Gale should have died. In my perfect ending, this is what would have happened...

Prim and Finnick never would have died.And Peeta and Annie would never have been rescued and brought back to district 13. And Pita never should have gone insane. Katniss and Gale would be friends again in district 13, but Katniss's love for Peeta would be so overwhelming that she tells Gale she will never love him the way he hopes because what they shared and the possibility of them ever being together only existed in a place that is gone forever. She would tell him everything has changed and somehow in the midst of the chaos, she has opened her heart and found a place of refuge in Peeta's arms. So Gale has a broken heart but is determined to fight for Katniss and the complete destruction of the capitol.They go on the mission together and rescue Peeta. In the end, Katniss should have definitely killed Snow. Then Coin would try to shoot Katniss but Gale jumps in front of her. Then Peeta kills Coin and comforts Katniss as she looks down in to the eyes of her dying best friend with his last words to her and Peeta being something profound about the future of Panem and Katniss' s success as the Mockingjay and bringing freedom to all of Panem.Then Katniss would a grand speech and people look to her as the new leader. Also, Katniss would have been corageous and bold. She would have loved Peeta severely after the second Hunger Games, thinking only of saving him and killing Snow. Finnick and Annie should have reunited in the end and gotten married. They all should have lived happily ever after in a reconstructed district 12, with the new government being restored to one of peace, harmony and freedom. Oh, and Haymitch would have died during the expedition to save Peeta, to fulfill his promise of doing whatever it takes to keep Peeta alive. And everyone would have loved the Mockingjay.

Anonymous
Thu Feb 16 2012 09:02
The book is a bit of a dissapointment ass there were a lot of loose endings. However, in this installment, Collins calls for us, the readers, to do a little reading between the lines. It was made clear throughout the book that Coin did not like or trust Katniss. Katniss was the face of the rebellion, the one the people in other districts trusted and loved. Therefore, she was a threat to Coin and her rise to power. Coin new that as long as Katniss was alive she would be a threat. That is why she sent the half deranged Peeta into battle, so that he could kill Katniss. When that plan failed, Coin sank to a lower level and used the one thing Katniss truly loved against her, Prim. We are expected to understand that it was Gale's bombs that killed Prim and that Coin sent them in so that the people would believe the Capitol w killing their own children. Yes Prim was too young to be in battle, Katniss admits that herself. She specifically says something about Prim needing special authorization to be out in the field with the medics. Who else would authorize that but Coin? As for killing Snow, Katniss realized that he was near death anyway as he couldn't stop coughing up blood. She also realized that Coin was no better than Snow, with her crazy scheduling, lies, and hidden agendas. So Katniss kills her to prevent another Hunger Games, to prevent Panem from becoming exactly the same as it was before the revolution, and to avenge Prim's death. In this act, Katniss is no longer the wailing, crazy, puppet that she has been throughout the entire book, she has finally stepped into her leader role as the Mockingjay.

With that said, I do agree that the very ending of the book leaves a little something to be desired. I understand that too many things have happened between Gale and Katniss for them to ever be the same. The war has brought out Gales anger, and brutality, which Katniss has always been aware of. The death of Prim, although not directly Gales fault is the last edge of the divide between them. I would have liked a bit more of explanation just for closure sake though. And ad for Katniss and Peeta's relationship? Collins really dropped the ball there. In one page, we are expected to comprehend how they heal, and grow to trust and love one another again. With their romance being such an important part of the story I think she definitely should have elaborated there. If not in the final chapter, at least in the epilogue.

I do think it is lovely that Peeta and Katniss have children. And I choose to interpret the ending as happy since Collins leaves so much up to us. The fact that her cldren learn about the rebellion in school and are free to play in the Meadow makes me think that the state of the country is much better and that the rebellion was a success. I would have liked some closure for Haymitch, Katniss' mother, and maybe even Gale. I hate to think of him alone and always longing for Katniss.

disgruntled reader
Mon Feb 13 2012 18:13
The Mockingjay was SUCH a disappointment. The first two books were so amazing and I had such high expectations... My thoughts especially mirror those of "disappointed fan" Jan 29 and 'Anonymous" Jan 27. The absolute kicker was when Katniss voted "yes" on the Hunger Games for the Capital kids; I lost all respect for her character.
So many things were unnecessarily mauled. Mockingjay was unredeeming and a travesty of the worst kind. I felt like Collins turned on her readers, betrayed us, and destroyed our faith in things noble and pure. Katniss became such a depressing weakling, groveling in the weight of her "debts" owed. I feel like Collins was mocking us for believing that a "war" of sorts could have a happy ending.
I could write more, but I can't believe I've wasted so much emotion on this already... uggg.
Anonymous
Mon Feb 13 2012 13:04
For those of you confused about why katniss killed snow here is the explanation copied and pasted from the hunger games wiki

President Coin first appears in Mockingjay. She is the leader of the rebellion, and President of District 13. She assumes power after the rebellion is successful. Katniss greatly dislikes her because of her ruthlessness and her hunger for power. She is very selfish, though tries to seem not. As proven by many acts throughout the novel. Some of these acts include ordering the assassination of Katniss, fire-bombing children in the Capitol, which kills not only the children, but also some rebel medics, including Primrose Everdeen, and killing a great amount of people unnecessarily. She is also very unfair as she was going to put Peeta, Johanna and Enobaria on trial for war crimes just because they had been left behind in the arena. She is even more ruthless than Snow in several domains. As payback for the harsh treatment of the districts, she suggests having a final Hunger Games in which the Capitols children--most directly related to those who held most power--serve as the 24 tributes. She is killed by an arrow fired by Katniss Everdeen (as vengence for her sister's death) during the execution of the former President of Panem, President Snow.

Anonymous
Mon Feb 13 2012 12:57
the reason she killed coin was because coin was responsible for prims death. coin killed a bunch of little kids and made it look like snow was responsible so that everyone would turn on him. and the reason that katniss chose to shoot coin over snow was because snow was sentenced to death so he was going to die anyway whether she shot him or not.
Anonymous
Sun Feb 5 2012 14:52
I agree with you!
I am so frustrated att the ending, LIKE WHAT!?!?
Earlier Katniss said that she would never have kids, like hello..?
Why did she make freaking kids then?!

I hate the third book, it destroyed the Hunger Games for me. Litterally!

d
Mon Jan 30 2012 22:52
I still cant believe she wrote off Peeta and Katniss in ONE SENTENCE. "Peeta and I grow back together too." or something. What? THAT COULDVE BEEN 3 CHAPTERS OF PURE DETAIL THAT YOU JUST JACKED UP. I mean come on?!? Basically she got lazy at the end, REALLY wanted to realese the book, and did a poor job at summing up what was sure to be an AMAZING trilogy.

pissed me off man.

AHHHHHHH
Sun Jan 29 2012 18:02
ARGGGGGGGG I AM SO ANGRY AT THE ENDING
disappointed fan...
Sun Jan 29 2012 18:01
things i didn't like about the book...
1. Prim and Finnick's death!
I thought only one of them should have died. Also they should have gone into more detail about how Prim died instead of just, oh the capital killed my sister...
2. Katniss didn't kill Snow!
that was her entire reason she went on the journey yet she didn't even get a chance to kill him.
3. COIN!
I have no idea what happened with her...i understand she didn't like Katniss but I don't get why Katniss killed Coin over Snow who has been torturing her the minute she entered the capitol for the first time!
4. WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO THE 76TH HUNGER GAMES!
I cant believe Katniss voted yes! I mean ISNT THAT THE ENTIRE REASON YOU STARTED THE FRICKEN REBELLION!?!? and what ended up happening to them? Did the idea end up coming through or no?
5. OMG GALE!!!!!!!!!
I cant believe he was just cast out. Ok so he went to district 2 but he was never mentioned after that! They were best friends and then all of a sudden you never here about him again!
6. What happened to the pearl and the other stuff in her drawer?
I thought those were so important now all of a sudden they are just gone?
7. Her mom
How could her mom just leave Katniss? I understand her daughter has just died and she has been through alot, BUT WHAT ABOUT KATNISS????? she suffered ALOT more than her and yet she just left her with nobody but Peeta and Haymitch.
8. What happened to the government?
All we know is that Paylor took over... but is there a democracy? like what happened????
9. The kids
I thought there should have been named or something. I thought the daughter should have been named Primrose:)
But this detail isn't very important to me
10. when the government was taken down katniss wasn't there
I thought she should have been there as well as the readers because she wakes up and has to have everyone summarize everything for her and us.
11. EVERYTHING WAS SO RUSHED!
all the tiny details like her in the hospital, and training with Johanna and stuff didnt matter but when it comes to Prin dying, 2 sentances explain what happened like what the heck!
12. Peeta
Peeta was barely in the book. I thought he should have been in it more and at the end I thought that his recovery should have been explained in more that 1 sentence...

the series were great and i had extremely high expectations for this book but i was really let down by the ending

lala
Sun Jan 29 2012 17:38
...very disappointing
Anonymous
Sat Jan 28 2012 16:11
truly truly..the books were great.! butt the problem was the detail in the third installment ( mockinjay). For example what happened to the pearl ,Petta should have saved it and givin it to her at the end as a ring. Also, the way that Prim died....more detail plase..also the ending was to fastt.., suzzane should have included a wedding how peeta got better and how they had children.. what happened to gale.. yahh we get it that he went to live in another district but what happend to him.,did he get married later on..did he find his family...there is lot of missing parts in this last book.hopefuly they give more detaqil in the movie..
Anonymous
Fri Jan 27 2012 16:30
Here are a few issues that concerned me about the ending of Mockingjay:

1. What happened to the pearl? This seemed like a significant item of value, yet its fate was never mentioned (Like many other issues among characters)

2. The death of Prim: The whole underlying reason for Katniss's efforts in the Hunger Games. There was no discussion on why Prim was put in the position. This conflict could have been resolved if Katniss and her Mother were to talk about Prim's death. Instead, Katniss and her mother part ways and the reader is left with nothing further.

3. Gale: There was no sympathy from him in regards to Prim's death. This seemed extremely out of character since he said the only thing he had going for him was taking care of Katniss' family. It seems remarkably odd that he would not show any signs of emotion to her. For example, maybe something along the lines of him feeling like he failed Katniss. In fact, overall it seems more like he was more about destruction, jealously of Peeta and Katniss together, and cared more about his own feelings. He mentions many times that he in no way can compete with Peeta and his efforts of self-sacrificing to protect Katniss (even though he does do many things to save Peeta for Katniss and protect her. It just seems like it wasn't selfless but rather an alternate motive involved with his actions). Peeta was more about the beauty of life, colorful paintings, always giving to others despite his own happiness. This always made Gale look bad, but with Gale simply going to district 2 and doing nothing and his lack of empathy for Prim's death and Katniss continuously makes him look worse.

4. Katniss agreeing to the final Hunger Game with the Capitol's children. This was simply appalling and destroyed the whole underlying message of the book despite the part where she says "nothing has changed."

5. What has become of the government? I felt this was a crucial topic that was horribly left out in the ending. Isn't order suppose to be restored at the end of a dystopian type society??

6. Coin: Something was missing about the whole turning point in Katniss and her decision to kill Coin instead of Snow. Some reference to Bogg's dying message to Katniss would have been helpful for a possible foreshadow of the event to come.

The ending was very short. The last, powerful sentence about her reasoning for choosing Peeta was beautiful in my opinion. If it hadn't been for that last line, the whole book would have unquestionably been a waste of time for me. This sentence did help give some closure to the Gale situation.

Lots of loose ends that were essential to the story/message in my opinion.

Anonymous
Wed Jan 25 2012 12:27
I think Katniss should of married Gale instead of Peeta, because Gale knows Katnis better then Peeta. Suzanne Collions should make a four book to let people know what Panem is like after Coin is killed by Katniss and Snow dies and what happened to Gale and Katniss's mother and who is ruleing Panem and what is district 12 like after they pick up and bury the bones of the died in the bombing and after they cleaned up all the ash. The ending could of been better.
Anonymous
Tue Jan 24 2012 21:02
okay the thing is she completely rushed the ending... okay Gale just gives up ? They knew each other for so long how is that possible ? i feel like she can still make a fourth book though explaining everything more like a prequel to the ending. I was truly depressed when i finished reading i didn't want it to be over... those are truly the only books i enjoyed reading the only ones the i felt like i was watching a movie ..
Anonymous
Tue Jan 24 2012 12:55
WHY WAS BOGGS IGNORED COMPLETELY?
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Sat Jan 21 2012 16:39
This is what bothered me about the last book:

1. The way that Finnick died

Um, yeah, could anyone else think of a less noble way to die then being torn apart by rabid wolf/demon things that was technically "off screen" for no reason? Finnick should have died for ANNIE, his ONE true love that the author built him up for. To make it worse, Katniss cares for about 5 seconds and then just leaves.

2. Prim dying.

Hellooo? would someone like to remind me of the entire reason that Katniss went into the games in the first place? I rest my case.

3. The fact that Katniss's mom AND Gale just "dissapear" and Katniss makes no effort to get them back.

Gale was her BEST FRIEND. and she LOVED him. and her mom? It just bothered me that she just left her alone. And I know that this is controversial, but I think that Katniss should have ended up with Gale, just because he knows her the best and their bond seemed so much sweeter than Peetas.

4. The author made the choice between Gale and Peeta so hard that she just simply put Gale away in another district and provides ZERO details about the wedding or her life.

Besides the kids, we have no idea who Katniss has matured to or who Peeta is.

5. At the end of the book, we still don't know what the world has come to.

Is there a system of democracy? Is there a president? Is District 12 better? Worse?

6. Katniss didnt kill president Snow.

The ENTIRE SERIES was dedicated to the absolute absurdity of Snow and his people, and Katniss even tells her squad "I kill President Snow." YAYY! and then when she finally gets her chance? SHe kills Coin. And I understand that Coin was a very pivotal character, but doesn't it bother you a little that Katniss never did it herself?

Overall, the epitome of the problem is this: the author built up the characters and the plot SO MUCH, and I was extremely excited to get to the end, but it ended in a heap of discontent. Katniss, who is supposed to be strong and represnet the people, literally ends the novel as a pathetic, disoriented individual who can't comprehend life. And that made me very, very sad. And Katniss was NEVER HAPPY, BUT SHE NEVER DID ANYTHING ABOUT IT.

Most of you might say, "well, how would you have ended it?"

Touche. I would have had Katniss corner Snow into his "rose room" and slowly list off the things that he did to her, and then shoot him with an arrow at the last second. I would flash foreward to a scene where Prim, mother, Katniss, Haymitch, Peeta, Gale, Finnick, and Annie sit at a table in Katniss's house in a land where people prosper, land grows, forests bloom, people are happy. Peeta and Katniss have a heart to heart chat about their feelings, and they embrace, Katniss thanking Peeta for showing her what love is. Gale and Katniss are together, and Peeta finds a new girl who is nothing like Katniss, because their relationship seemed forced.
The very last part would be Katniss staring at a picture of her father, and as she holds Gale's hand and laughs about the times, to come, she knows that amidst the horrible Games, there will always be people she can trust.

please comment, id love to see what you think

Anonymous
Fri Jan 20 2012 12:00
Prim died so that Katniss could realize that both COIN and SNOW were wrong to take power. Collins gave the readers hints the whole time about this. For example, she sent Peeta to "help" with the war effort. This was to kill Katniss, obviously. When she thought Katniss was dead, she wasn't even phased. She expected and welcomed it to happen. Not only did she say her cause to start the rebellion was over, she also basically willingly let her to into the war. If Katniss's saftey meant that much to Coin and the rebellion, she would've sedated her and made her stay, considering District 13's really generous with the sedatives. Collions expects the reader to pick up on all these things. There's more to reading than what's in the book, or even what is implied. You need to read between the lines to really grasp what she's doing with this novel. I agree, it seems thrown together, but it's not nearlyu as bad as everyone seems to think it is.
Anonymous
Fri Jan 20 2012 11:36
Can someone please call the Author and have her try again...I hated the last book! I'm so disappointed!!!

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